I have the next couple thousand words of Dominions of Glory ready. But before I post them I'm going to go back and tweak section 1, just to satisfy my own need to be relatively satisfied with what I've written. I won't be doing this with all the sections (Yet. I'll always do a lot more editing/restructuring etc...), just part 1 for the moment, since getting the beginning right is so crucial, and since it's nagging at me and I'm having a hard time ignoring it!
Hopefully I'll have a rough post of the revision up soon!